Preparation of my Script / Final Script

For the preparation of my script I had to work in a group so I can understand my role fully and how to act it out fully and as professionally as I could, aswell as deconstructing jingles. We all helped eachother with questions to be asked and how they could be answered. To write my script I had many drafts so I can perfect it and make sound as professional as possible. I had also wrote out and rephrased some questions to ask my guests.

First of All before recording I had to write a script this is shown below. This is my script of the Radio Jingle. As a group we had different section of the script this is mine shown below.

Hello it’s Hitesh Varsani and your listening to W.A.V.Y Fm today we have 3 different stories which are:
Local boy stabbed in Wembley
The increase in A Level results In Brent
And a ridiculous day when the sky went black and many people thought it was a scene from the film apocalypse.

First the tragic story of a youth getting stabbed whilst on the 182.
We are going to Nathan Wauchope for the latest developments on this case.
(Nathan Wauchope Should have his script)

The knife crime epidemic in London has sadly gained another victim this week.

A teenager is fighting for his life after he was stabbed on a 182 bus in Wembley.

The Police were called at 1.30pm, to Wembley Park Underground Station where they found the injured 17-year-old in a critical condition.

He was taken to an east London hospital by air ambulance and is still fighting for his life.

A weapon has not been recovered and there have been no arrests.

Our thoughts are now with the family of the teen.

With this incident the total number of fatal stabbings has increased to a shocking 7 this year alone, despite a crackdown by the government on knife crime.

Our 2nd story is on the Rising AS Levels in Brent

1.Hitesh: Now we have Zeinab Yamout, one of the Local Education Officer
2.Zeinab: Hello, nice to meet you!

1. What do you think of the cause of the rising A-Level results in Brent?
2. I think that the children of today now see that A-Levels are actually quite important in the future and are trying to work hard on getting the grades they know they can achieve.

1. Do you think the rise of A-Level results will see an increase in university applicant from this Area?
2. I think so, yes, now that they have achieved their grades at A-Level, they can go on and achieve a higher level at University and could even get a degree.

1. A-Level in Brent is still considerable lower than the rest of the UK. What do you think the Government can do to change it?
2. I think that the Government can go inspect the teachers while they are teaching A-Level student and maybe talk to the student individually and see they feel about the learning environment in their College or 6th Form.

H1 - Saving the best till last. A group of locals scared for their lives thought the sky went black instead it was a flock of pigeons. Now we go to Hadiya Abdi; a resident of the area and an avid birdwatcher. Why don’t you tell us about what happened earlier today?

H2 – several residents this morning woke up to find that the sky was pitch-black and without any other logical explanation many people began to think it was the end of the world

H1 – so what really did happen?

H2 – the large black cloud turned out to be a large flock of pigeons, which was indeed very unusual as pigeons rarely travel in such large groups

H1 – so we can’t really blame them for thinking the apocalypse had arrived?

H2 – (Laugh) I guess not